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Reality Check

  

She was so tired she could barely breathe, no less eat, yet sleep was something she had not enjoyed in months.  Her mind had occupied itself with the same thoughts for four years and now with this revelation, her brain was painfully numb—and she wished it would once again whirl with unanswered questions—anything would be better than empty…..

I feel so unsure as I take your hand and lead you to the dance floor. As the music dies, something in your eyes calls to mind the silver screen and all its sad good byes…

*Careless Whisper echoed against the darkened corners of her room.

They had worked in the same office for the past four years, not side by side, but in close proximity; her tidy reception desk faced the yawning elevators—his crowded terminal sat in a far corner of the massive suite, an arm’s reach from a window view of Madison and 5th in NYC.

From the first day he walked into Macy’s Communications, quietly disappearing behind his computer, she felt the attraction.  He did not seem to notice anything or anyone in the room, including her.  She knew his name was Benicio Sonaros, by the nameplate on his desk.  That’s all she knew, other than the strong draw pulling her close to him.

Days dragged on, her interest growing—he entirely indifferent—until one day they literally bumped into one another in the elevator—she gazing up into the softest brown eyes alive—he finding himself gripped by the sweetest blue eyes he’d ever seen in a 5-foot-tall woman.

“Sorry,” he stammered, flustered.  “You ok?”  He realized he had slammed into her shoulder with his quarterback frame.

She was seductively silent, but nodded shyly in exchange for words that would not come.  His soft accent almost stopped her heart.

She didn’t seem to intimidate him, as other women did.  He liked that.  He also enjoyed the floral scent his senses caught as her long blonde hair swirled around her face, cascading down her back when she quickly turned her head.  He thought she was tiny, elegant and very pretty.

“You first,” he guided her out of the elevator as the doors opened.

“Thank you,” she replied, too politely she cringed, as they walked toward the garage exit of the large office complex.  “Hope it stopped raining,” she added lightly.

“I like the rain,” he responded with a smile, breaking pace with her to head down another aisle of parked cars toward his small compact. “Good bye.”

“Bye…”she called out, watching his long strides, wishing they were driving off together, instead of facing her lonely ride and empty apartment.

That was their first meeting ‘outside’ of the office.  After several months of brief ‘hello’s” and smiling nods, they started eating lunch together—and relaxing in one another’s company until finally he suggested they have dinner together.  That started 7 months of the so-called dating game.

When they were together they would laugh and talk about general and somewhat intimate subjects, but never entered risky personal areas of conversation.  She learned he was 29, had 2 sisters and a brother in another state and that his parents were divorced—and realized that she had to more or less pry information out of him. During the first month he learned that she was almost 25, the only child of an Iowa farm couple, had lived on her own in the city since graduating college at the age of 21—this was her first job after college, and that she was loving, warm, cute, funny, very approachable and could be a danger to him.  Other than that, they seemed a well-matched couple who thoroughly enjoyed each other’s company on a daily basis.  When they were not together exploring NY restaurants and shops, they’d be at work glancing across the room at each other, or talking on the phone.

 

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